Field Trip 28-06

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For a few long, agonizingly slow seconds, no one said or did anything. Jazz, Isaac, and Gordon were all utterly motionless. They stood there, staring open-mouthed at Roxa while the other girl held the choker in one hand and stared right back at them. It wasn’t quite a threatening expression, but it was one that basically seemed to say, ‘yeah, this is me, you got a problem?’

Clearly, the months that Roxa had spent with her pack had basically erased any and all guilt she felt about what she had become. The other wolves had really done wonders for her confidence.

“Oh… oh my God.” That was Jazz, the black girl was the first to find her voice, strangled as it sounded. “You–you’re… you’re…” Standing there, she lifted a hand to point, shaky as it was. “How… what… you’re–Does that mean that you’re–you’re really a–” She stopped, cringing.

“Werewolf?” Roxa finished for her. “Yeah, turns out some of them get a kick out of turning Heretics. That’s what really happened over Thanksgiving, when I disappeared.” Spreading her arms out, she gestured before turning in a circle. “This is me. Roxa the Heretic Werewolf.”

I actually saw tears in Jazz’s eyes. She was acting like Roxa had suddenly revealed a terminal disease or something. Which, I supposed actually made sense considering what the other girl had been raised to believe. Her hand rose as if she was trying to reach out toward Roxa before catching herself. “Roxa,” she lamented. “Roxa, but that means, but that means… that you’re–”

“Evil?” Roxa finished for her, folding her arms with a raised eyebrow. “You mean when I ‘evilly’ helped you guys deal with that Seosten bitch who took over Columbus, or when I ‘evilly’ helped get you out of that space station? Or do you mean when I ‘evilly’ revealed that I’m really a werewolf when I had absolutely no reason to do that other than to back up what Flick said?”

Biting my lip, I hesitated, glancing to the others before speaking up. “Roxa, you didn’t have to–”

“Yeah,” she interrupted without looking away from her former teammates, “I did. I’m not gonna spend this entire trip, or the rest of my damn life, hiding what I am from the people who should trust me. So yeah, I’m a werewolf. If that bothers you people, you’re welcome to go find a non-werewolf person to survive on this alien world with. Or,” she added while narrowing her eyes, “you could try to do something about it. But I’m telling you now, that won’t go well for you.”

I saw the way Jazz flinched. She looked torn up inside, with eyes that were still openly wet. “But… but R-Roxa,” she stammered, clearly grasping for anything, “I don’t… don’t understand.”

Finally, Sands had clearly had enough. “You wanna understand?” she blurted abruptly. “Here’s what you need to understand. Our entire civilization is a fucking lie, alright? Everything they teach us about how everything that isn’t human is evil, that’s straight up bullshit. Those Seosten like the bitch in the hotel and cyborg man, yeah, that whole race of evil cocksuckers created Crossroads and now they teach us to kill everything that’s not human so they can use us as their soldiers, or guard dogs, or whatever. That’s what you need to understand.” To finish, Sands spoke slowly and deliberately. “A lot of those Strangers we kill, they’re not the monsters.

“We are.”  

It was the most emotion I’d seen Sands express about finding out that Strangers weren’t all evil since she’d accepted it. Clearly, she wasn’t happy about the ‘Crossroads entire reason for existing was to act as boogeymen for anyone the Seosten didn’t like’ thing. Hell, from the look on the other girl’s face, there was a lot more that she wanted to say about it. But she cut herself off and settled on simply scowling at the floor with her arms folded tightly, trembling with anger.

Gordon was the one who spoke next, his tone almost as calm as ever, though I could detect a little bit of emotion underlying it. “You… the choker.” His eyes had centered on the thing, which had turned visible once Roxa took it off. “That’s the choker that we heard Flick talking about.”

Jazz gave a start then, as if she’d completely forgotten it until that moment. “The choker,” she echoed, looking at the thing, then looking to me. “You knew–you’ve been helping her… but…”

“It’s like they said,” I confirmed, moving my gaze from her to Isaac and then to Gordon, “Strangers aren’t all evil. No more than all humans are evil. And if we’re gonna have a chance at surviving out here, that’s something you’re all going to have to try to accept. Because we need Roxa. I’m sticking with her. I trust her more than I trust any of you. Sorry, that’s just the way it is.”

Sands gave a little nod at that. “She’s right. I’m sticking with Roxa and Flick. You guys have a problem with that…” She shrugged. “Like the girl said, just go find another cave to hide out in.”

Isaac was the next to speak, raising his hands placatingly. “Hey now, let’s not all get drastic or anything. Let’s just talk about this. You’re right, Roxa, you’ve been doing a lot of not-evil stuff, stuff you didn’t have to do. But some of it could’ve been self-preservation. I mean, getting out of the space station would’ve been harder if you were alone. And you could’ve shown up to fight that, uh, Seosten back there at the hotel even if we weren’t there. It could’ve been personal.”

“Yeah,” Jazz agreed, her voice shaking as she spoke. “He… he’s right, you’ve helped a lot, but… but it still could’ve been just for show. I mean–except… except showing yourself now, unless you were trying to trick us, or…” Her head shook, and the girl closed her eyes tightly like she just wanted the whole thing to go away. “Damn it,” she muttered before repeating it several times, each one a little louder as she tightened her fists. “Damn it, damn it, damn it!” Turning, Jazz put her fist against the wall of the cave, then repeated the action twice before whirling back to us. “You guys are crazy! You’re talking complete nonsense! Crossroads was made by evil Strangers so that we’d go kill all the people they didn’t like? What the fuck?! You’re just–just-”

“Lying?” Roxa finished for her. “Trying to trick you? Crazy? Are we crazy? Or is killing every intelligent species on the planet just because they’re not completely human the crazy thing? I’m still me, Jazz. Still Roxa. Same girl, just with new abilities. It’s not that different from becoming a Heretic, is it? You start out as completely human, then something happens to change what-”

“Stop!” Jazz blurted then, head shaking violently. “Just stop, stop it! Stop trying to compare it. It’s not the same, okay? It’s not the same! Strangers are evil! We’re not the monsters, we help people, we have to save humanity. If we weren’t there, the Strangers would, they’d kill everyone. We’ve seen them! We’ve seen Strangers killing humans, torturing humans, eating humans!”

“You’re right,” I agreed, nodding as Jazz’s attention whipped over to me. “There are evil Alt–Strangers, just like there are evil humans. But not all of them. Look at all the monsters in human history. You think having a Hitler or a Jeffrey Dahmer means all other humans are irredeemably evil? I, for one, wouldn’t wanna be judged by the worst examples of humanity.”

“But… but…” Jazz looked like she wanted to flail. Her eyes kept darting back and forth as her fists repeatedly tightened and loosened. She looked even more lost and confused at the idea than the fact that we were all stranded on the far end of space on an alien planet surrounded by monsters. The mere suggestion that being a werewolf didn’t automatically make Roxa evil was pretty much making the other girl lose her mind. “But that can’t… I mean, it’s not the same.”

Gordon, raising his chin curiously, announced, “Maybe we should take this one step at a time. We’re all stuck here together, whether we like it or not. None of us wants to be taken by those.. Seosten. If nothing else, Roxa’s proved that much. So for now, we’re on the same side.”

“It’s not that simple,” Jazz insisted. “You know it’s not that simple. You–” She took a breath, glancing toward Sands for a second as if desperate for someone to back her up. “You should understand. Maybe not Flick, but you know what…” Shuddering, she continued, speaking quickly. “Everything they tell us, everything they teach us, it’s that that,” her hand gestured to the girl in question, “isn’t Roxa anymore! It’s a monster that’s wearing her face, a monster that took her over and is… is… wearing her just like those Seosten you keep talking about. When a human being turns into a Stranger, the human part dies and the monster completely takes over.

“So you’re saying, ‘let’s just work with them for now’? What if you’re wrong. What if you’re all wrong, and that isn’t Roxa anymore?” Jazz was staring at the girl, hands tightened into fists once more. “What if Roxa’s dead and gone and we’re just working with the monster that killed her? What if, instead of getting justice for Roxa like we should be doing, we’re working with the thing that slithered into her body and destroyed her? What if it’s laughing at us because we’re falling for its lies?!” Her voice was rising with each word, until she sounded almost hysterical.

Slowly, Jazz took a step toward the other girl with her hands held low and out, apparently so that we wouldn’t think that she was attacking or something. Her voice cracked as she continued. “You… you think I don’t want you to be Roxa? You think I don’t want our entire society to be wrong so that you can still be Roxa? You were my friend, my–we were supposed to be partners. I’ve been trying to find you for months, months! I want you to be Roxa so, so fucking bad. I want these guys to be right. I never wanted this, I never wanted to even be a Heretic! I didn’t want it! I want you to be you. But… but what if you’re not? What if you’re really a monster, squatting in Roxa’s body and laughing at how naive and stupid we are? What if we’re letting this thing get away with killing Roxa, just because we want her to still be herself? What if it’s using us?”

By that point, Jazz was directly in front of Roxa, the two of them mere inches apart. For her part, the werewolf girl simply stood still, meeting Jazz’s gaze evenly as she listened to her words until the girl was finally finished. Then she slowly lifted her chin, considering for a couple long seconds before speaking as plainly as possible. “If you don’t use what someone does to determine if they’re good or evil…” Her shoulders rose in a shrug. “Then what do you use?”

While Jazz’s mouth opened and shut a couple times, Roxa continued flatly. “I’m not evil. I’m not a monster. I can’t say it any more plainly than that. And I’m not going to apologize for what– who I am. I’m done feeling embarrassed or ashamed of myself. I’m a werewolf, and I’m a Heretic. You can either judge me by what I do, or by what some evil, manipulative bastards tell you to judge me by. That’s your business. Either way, I’m not changing a goddamn thing about myself. You got a problem, deal with it.”

W-wow, Tabbris ‘whispered’ in my head, sounding like she was in awe. She’s really brave.

I think she’s also sick of being afraid of how people will react to her, I pointed out while watching to see what the others would do. I guess after spending a few months with other wolves, she’s done worrying about it. She’s sort of… ripping off the bandaid and then telling it to piss off.

Jazz, meanwhile, had closed her eyes. Her fists were held tightly against her side, and the black girl was openly shuddering. Her mouth moved a little, but I couldn’t tell what she was whispering at first. Then I got it, she was repeatedly muttering, “Damn it, damn it, damn it,” while tears feel freely down her face. Opening her eyes, she stared at Roxa. “I want it,” she blurted. “I want you to be you. I do. I swear I do, but… but… if we’re wrong, if they’re wrong, and you’re really a monster, then I’m letting you get away with killing my friend! Everyone who teaches us, all the adults, they all say you’re evil! How can we just ignore that? They all say you’re a monster.”

Roxa’s mouth opened, but it was Gordon who actually spoke. “Do they?” he asked simply, drawing everyone’s attention that way. The dark-skinned boy gave a little shrug. “I mean, I know what they say, but… what about what you overheard at Flick’s house, with the headmistress?”

Okay, that got my attention. I’d been trying to stay out of the conversation, but that one I had to jump in on. “I’m sorry, what?” I blurted, staring at the boy. “Who overheard what at my house?” Pausing, I added, “Actually, come to think of it, what the hell were you talking about when you said you heard me talking about the choker? I never talked about it without… safety measures.”

Gordon took a step my way, explaining simply, “We knew that you had something to do with Roxa disappearing, that you knew more about it than anyone else was saying. Douglas’s power, it… allows him to ask a question and get an answer, or directions to an answer, once per day. And every time he asked it anything about why Roxa disappeared, it always directed us to you.”

Well, that explained why they had been so obsessed with me. As I nodded slowly in realization, the boy continued. “We went looking for answers in your dorm room awhile back. You came in while we were there, but Jasmine used her power to turn us all invisible. While you were there, you mentioned the choker. You said that all you had to do was ‘get that choker on Roxa’ and then she could come back to the school. You were on the phone with someone named Asenath, and you said–” Pausing then, he looked like something suddenly made sense, nodding thoughtfully. “Oh. You asked her if werewolves and vampires really have some kind of rivalry.”

That… didn’t sound familiar at all. Especially the part about the choker. Why would I have phrased it like that? ‘Get the choker on Roxa?’ What the hell? But still, maybe–oh. Tabbris? I prompted, realizing that I didn’t have to rely on my own memory. Did that ever happen?

The answer came immediately and emphatically. No! No, you never had that conversation, and you never did… any of that. Not like that. I swear, they’re wrong. It never, ever happened.  

I nodded slowly before meeting Gordon’s gaze. “I hate to tell you guys this, but that never happened.” As all three of their mouths opened, I held a hand up. “Okay, let me rephrase. I didn’t say that. I wasn’t there, and I never had that conversation that you overheard. I’m not saying you didn’t overhear it, I’m saying it wasn’t me. Whoever you saw, it was someone else posing as me.”

And wasn’t that a massive punch in the gut? Someone, the Seosten obviously, had been posing as me just to manipulate these guys. It was probably an attempt to get them to report us to the Committee in a way that Gaia couldn’t cover up.

“Posing as you?” Jazz echoed, her eyes wide as she shook her head quickly at my words. “What the hell does that mean? Why would someone pose as you?”

“We do know that they have a way of posing as other people,” Gordon pointed out mildly. “The shapeshifter that took Paul’s place.”

Biting her lip, Jazz looked sick at the reminder before swallowing hard. “Y-yeah, but… but she did have someone named Asenath living at her house. I saw her. I saw her, and she’s a… a Stranger too.”

“You’re right,” I confirmed, seeing no need to try to lie about that much. “Asenath is a vampire. She’s also my friend. She saved my life, she saved my father’s life, and she’s done nothing but help me since I met her. So yes, she was living at my house. She’s been protecting my father. But we never had that conversation, and I never would’ve phrased it like that. We were trying to get the choker so that Roxa could come back. The choker hides Alters from the Heretic-Sense.”

“Alter,” Jazz repeated, squinting. “You said Alter again. What does that even mean?”

Sands answered for me. “It’s their word for what they are. Non-Humans, I mean. We call them Strangers. They call themselves Alters. As in ‘Alternative to human’.”

“But that’s not–” Jazz started to object before stopping herself. Taking a long, visible breath, the girl considered her words for a moment. Her eyes glanced briefly toward Roxa before she started once more. “They call themselves… Alters?”

As I nodded, Gordon spoke up again. “The point is, Jasmine said that all our teachers say that Strangers… Alters are evil. But she heard Headmistress Sinclaire talking to the vampire when we went to spy on your house.”

Spying on my house. They had been spying on my house. I felt indignant, even if part of me understood. Would I really have done anything different in their situation?

Isaac gave a quick nod. “Hey, yeah. So why would the headmistress be all for teaching about how evil Strangers are if she’s into this hippy ‘everyone just love one another’ shit?”

“It’s complicated,” I replied. “If she started changing what the school taught, the Committee would get rid of her.”

Making a noise that sounded like a cross between confusion and anger, Jazz put both hands over her face. “Just–just stop. Everyone just stop for a minute. Stop it.” She stood there like that, hands covering her face for a long moment. “Isaac,” she started finally, “You said your Edge vision was all about this Asenath chick killing your ancestor and all his people.”

“Uh, yeah.” The other boy gave a little shrug, looking self-conscious. “That’s what I saw.”

When Jazz looked back to me, I replied, “He’s probably missing context. That’s not the point. The point is, we’re all here. So you’ve got a choice, just like Roxa said. You can stay here and work with us so that we can keep everyone alive until we find a way home. Or you can go off on your own. But get this straight. If you can’t work with Roxa, then you might as well leave right now.”

“I didn’t say I–” Jazz stopped herself, biting her lip as she looked over to the girl in question. Her voice was timid. “I don’t want you to be evil. But I can’t just–I… you want us to believe that the headmistress of the school is letting them teach us all about evil Strangers, when it’s not true? You want us to believe that our entire society, that it’s all wrong? How do I–how do we–I…” She sighed. “Can you just give us some time? Let me… think about all this. I can’t just–I can’t just….”  She gave up on trying to explain it, lowering her head and heaving a long sigh.

It wasn’t surprising. Even in this situation, it was going to take time for Jazz, for any of them, to accept what we were saying. We were actually pretty lucky that the three of them had stood there and listened to us for as long as they had. Sure, this was kind of a… unique situation. But still. The fact that they were even entertaining the idea said a lot. I couldn’t help but wonder how much spending the past who knew how long wondering why Gaia had been talking to Asenath had actually helped. It had to have chipped away at their beliefs, at least enough for them to listen now.

I nodded. “Sure. We need to figure out where we are, how safe this place is, and everything else.”

“How are we gonna do that?” Isaac asked, gesturing back out of the cave. “I’m pretty sure we can’t just go blundering around out there without half the Seosten within a thousand miles figuring out where we are. We don’t know where anything is, and–oh yeah, we’re stuck on another fucking planet.”

“Can you tell us more about these Seosten?” Gordon asked. “How did we get here? How did they… as you said, ‘create Crossroads’? What do they want? Let’s say you’re right, just for now. What else can you tell us about everything, because we’re lost.”

Jazz abruptly lifted her head, nodding. “And Paul. Tell us what happened to Paul, what that thing was that took him over. What happened? How could he just–”

I held up my hands to hold off more questions. “We’ll get to all that, I promise. Right now, Isaac’s right. We need to figure out where we are, what’s around us, how far civilization is,  and all the rest of that stuff without blundering around. So I need a piece of wood. Shouldn’t be too hard to find one out there.”

“A piece of wood?” Gordon echoed, head tilting. “Why?”

I smiled a little bit. “It’s a spell. I… guess I could teach it to you. If you guys think you can work with me for long enough.”

Isaac spoke up then, his own smile wide and open. “Learning a spell sounds cool. And I guess we might as well try to get along, for now anyway.

“After all, we’re all friends here.”

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  1. Well, well, well, that could’ve gone worse, huh? I mean, granted, the whole situation was pretty much to the point that the only person they really had to convince was Jazz, considering one of them is secretly an evil murdering sociopath and the other is actually a hybrid. But hey, it’s still pretty good. Jazz didn’t run out of the cave screaming, which is a plus.

    Also, we have a bit more fanart! Yes, you can find them on the art page. But you can also see them right here. First up, there’s a couple great pictures from The squid of giants. We have Flick using her improved staff right here and a picture of Gidget the cyberform cougar right here! Then we have an awesome picture of Tabbris done by Impstar that can be seen here. So thanks to both of them, and to everyone who does art and fanfiction for this story!

    Oh, and speaking of thanks, it is time to have our next drawing for the free mini-interludes this month. As a quick reminder, I will draw one free 1000 word interlude per 100 dollars in donations. This past month, we had 220 dollars in donations counting Patreon. That means we have 2 free mini-interludes to give away. The winners will be drawn from the list of people who donated during the month of October, including Patreon, and will be contacted over the weekend. So good luck!

    Anyway, thanks for reading, guys! We’ve got one more chapter left in this arc. So look forward to that Monday, as well as the next mini-interlude, which should be out at some point this weekend. Oh, and if you get a chance, I would personally love it if you could drop a quick vote for this story on Top Web fiction by clicking right here!

    Other than that, I hope you all have a great day! Tags for this chapter are: At This Rate – Gaia Should Just Get Flick To Take The Entire First Year Class To Another Planet To Recruit Them Into The Conspiracy., Felicity Chambers, Flick, Gidget, Gordon Is Better At Keeping Secrets To Himself Than Any Of The Main Characters At This Point., Gordon Kuhn, Isaac Acosta, Jazz Rhodes, Roxa Pittman, Sands, Tabbris

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  2. I,for one, wouldn’t wanna be judged by the worst examples of humanity.
    Needs a space after I

    Great chapter! I loved how you portrayed Jazz!


  3. Well, that went about as well as could be expected. Watching Gordon and Isaac react while knowing what they’re actually about is pretty fun.

    Sands’ outburst was an important moment. She’s come a long way.

    And we get another bit of Flick and Tabbris synergizing well. Good on them.

    I can’t wait to see what all their animals are.

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    1. Tabbris didn’t get to say much in this chapter, as expected. But that perfect memory sure came in handy.

      Roxa’s grown a lot. It’s amazing how the girl who initially was convinced she’d become a monster is now so self-assured and confident. She just went, dropped the bomb, and dared anyone to do anything about it!

      Sands has certainly refined and channeled her anger over not getting the nice clean world of heroes and monsters she was raised to believe in, and aimed it at the right place. She’s almost a perfect foil to her father now. They both saw the truth, and it hurt. The difference is that Liam ran and Sands didn’t. I have no doubt that Sands still wishes she lived in the world she grew up believing in, but she knows she doesn’t.

      Jazz is a bit more hardheaded than expected.

      Gordon’s playing his cards REALLY close to his chest. I mean seriously I’d have expected Sands openly declaring for Roxa and Flick to get him to make his own reveal. At this rate I’m half expecting they’ll get home without Gordon making that reveal, or that Flick will figure out it when an enemy tries to possess him and gets fragged.

      I wonder if we’d be suspecting Issac yet if we hadn’t had the reveal back in the interlude arc? Hell, I wonder if the interlude arc seriously changed the plotting for these last two arcs?

      FUCK YOU ISSAC! Jazz was starting to get it, then you had to go start sticking up for the party line and send her off on a frankly crazy tangent.

      Seriously if the “evil monster” is so committed to impersonating Roxa that it shows up out nowhere months later to bail her friends out for no personal gain … I’m not seeing where the “evil monster” comes from as opposed to alpha fork. I mean even if Jazz’s “Roxa dies, something’s wearing the body” crazyness was true all evidence points that to something being Roxa 2.0 … and that something didn’t actually kill Roxa 1.0 anyway, but it did avenge her. Killing Roxa 2.0 over Roxa 1.0’s death is hardly justice, Jazz.

      Jazz actually kind of aggravates me here, because she’s supposed to be way out of the loop on Heretic stuff and into Bystander culture to the point of basically being Bystander-kin and yet she’s desperately rationalizing here. Roxa’s staring her in the face, the only reason she knows that Roxa pings her magic power detector is that Roxa blew her cover to help Flick, and she’s still looking for excuses for Crossroads to be 100% right. She doesn’t even have the decency to look for justification to say that Roxa’s still Roxa but Crossroads is only wrong in this one edge case.

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      1. Even if she’s out of the loop, she’s still a heretic. So if she doesn’t poke holes in it to find some way of proving it wrong then everything she, her people, and generations of other Heretics have done would have just been unwarranted slaughter. Her reaction is pretty much the most genuine, all things considered.

        It’s a whole lot easier to justify killing when you believe that you’ve been righteous. Even easier to do what it takes to hold onto that belief.

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  4. Easy way to convince Jazz; tell her what the Heretic Edge is and how it works.

    Basically, that it’s the undead head of an Alter and that being exposed to it gives people some of its abilities. Basically, becoming a Heretic is exactly like being turned into a werewolf, only with some extra magic bits added.


    1. Alex is right, there was a scene back in arc 7 where a teacher took the class to Bosch’s hometown and explained how he used a Hangman’s corpse to build the Edge.

      There was some discussion about this after that chapter came out. Basically, Heretics justify using something like thay as a Deal With The Devil type thing, and the school didn’t actually explain what the Edge was until after Gaia took over, the implication being that she’s trying to get students to ask questions hardliners would rather not be asked.

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  5. >“Stop!” Jazz blurted then, head shaking violently. “Just stop, stop it! Stop trying to compare it. It’s not the same, okay? It’s not the same! Strangers are evil! We’re not the monsters, we help people, we have to save humanity. If we weren’t there, the Strangers would, they’d kill everyone. We’ve seen them! We’ve seen Strangers killing humans, torturing humans, eating humans!”

    Hm, I suppose expecting Jazz to be sufficiently open-minded from the start would have been too much. However, I have sympathy for her. She never wanted this life anyway, and she’s had one hell of a first year.

    >“But that’s not–” Jazz started to object before stopping herself. Taking a long, visible breath, the girl considered her words for a moment. Her eyes glanced briefly toward Roxa before she started once more. “They call themselves… Alters?”

    This? This, right here? I think this is progress, even if only a small step.

    >Isaac spoke up then, his own smile wide and open. “Learning a spell sounds cool. And I guess we might as well try to get along, for now anyway.
    “After all, we’re all friends here.”

    You sit on a throne of lies, Isaac.

    I found Roxa’s attitude of “I’m so done with this hiding who I am bullshit” throughout this update to be rather well executed.

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  6. I’m not the nice person Flick is. Dealing with all the damned lies and conspiracies, I’m done with trust, and some people are getting possessed in their sleep. Or something. Hauling one’s ass around a Seosten planet is bad enough. Doing it with people you can’t trust…screw that. All Flick really knows about the members of Team Seosten Tools is they are relatively easy to manipulate, and they had a minion of Charmeine’s amongst their ranks posing as their leader for God only knows how long.

    Assuming Jazz, Isaac and Gordon are clean might be all protagonist-heroic, but it isn’t SMART. (And this has nothing to do with Reader Knowledge Bias). The thing that would be deeply bothering me here is now that they’re having a little chat, I’m not seeing any major meltdowns about the reveal something ganked their team leader and replaced him. That would set my teeth on edge.

    Also, it might pass unnoticed otherwise, but with a co-pilot possessed of a photographic memory, Isaac’s perfectly-timed divisive statements are beginning to add up. I think that sociopath has grown a bit accustomed to being able to delete manipulative conversations that don’t turn out his way.


    1. Sleep possession is treading way too close to Charmiene for Flick and Tabbris’s comfort, plus they know that there’s hybrids out there and have no clue who they are or what happens if Flick tries.

      Jazz is too busy freaking out about everything else to have a distinct freakout reaction to Paul being dead. Gordon has no visible freakout reaction to anything so that can’t be held against him either. Issac is fishy as hell even without metaknowledge, especially the way he comments on every topic but that.

      I expect Flick and Tabbris calling bullshit on Issac’s clown act to happen quite soon, chronologically. The only thing keeping him alive right now is that Flick hasn’t had a chance to think about the topic, because it’s pretty damn obvious that he’s trying to sabotage cohesion when his statements are examined and she can go over them with a fine tooth comb after the fact.


  7. Crossposting from SB:

    So, I found something we seem to have missed, but Flick and Tabbris probably didn’t.

    This whole chapter Gordon was subtly nudging the conversation in ways that support Flick or poke holes in the narrative Issac was trying to get Roxa’s team to fall for.

    The very first thing he does is point out that the choker has a specific purpose – hiding Roxa’s werewolfness. Kills Issac’s mind control narrative dead.

    Then he points out that the stranded team can’t afford to fight each other and that Roxa’s definitely on their side for whatever reason. Avoids getting pegged as one of the “crazy people”, but non-the-less pushes Jazz towards at the least a wait-and-see stance, and subtly signals that he’s willing to live and let live.

    Then there’s THIS:

    “Do they?” he asked simply, drawing everyone’s attention that way. The dark-skinned boy gave a little shrug. “I mean, I know what they say, but… what about what you overheard at Flick’s house, with the headmistress?”

    He reveals that his team was spying on Flick, reminds Jazz that no, the adults DON’T all disagree with Flick, and basically hijacks the conversation so Flick can poke holes in their investigation.

    Which she promptly starts doing, and when questioned Gordon gives Flick more than enough information to realize that someone was spoofing the investigation and take a shot at making that argument. Then the topic of shapeshifting impersonation comes up and Jazz and Issac are so badly thrown that Jazz can’t get a rant going and Issac can’t try to twist the topic, leaving Flick to control the flow of the rest of the conversation.

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