Investigations 25-01 – Gordon Kuhn (Interlude Arc)

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Please note, the following is the beginning of a 6-chapter Interlude Arc focusing on Roxa’s old team as they investigate Flick and that whole situation. We will be taking a brief break from our main character to see what’s going on over here. Flick will be back after this arc. 

Wednesday, January 24th, 2018 (Five days before Flick and company confronted Fahsteth and Flick’s house was attacked by werewolves)

Most of the people at the Crossroads Academy believed that Gordon Kuhn had no sense of humor. That wasn’t exactly true, since there were things that he found amusing. But he had goals, goals that could only be accomplished if he took his training seriously, and didn’t squander the opportunity.

That, and he also didn’t particularly relish the idea of spending a bunch of time laughing alongside the very same people who would cheerfully murder him if they knew what he really was.

Because while Gordon’s mother was a Heretic just as everyone thought, his father was something altogether different. His father wasn’t human.

Most of the people at Cossroads, if they knew what Gordon really was, what his father was, would want him dead. There were only a couple of people that he could trust with his secret. And one of those people, the person who had recruited Gordon into the school to begin with while knowing what he was, had been murdered a couple of days into the school year. Professor Pericles, one of the very few people that Gordon knew without a doubt he could trust, had been murdered.

So was it really any wonder that he didn’t tend to have much of a sense of humor?

“Gordo!” That was Isaac, his roommate. The two were so dissimilar, with Isaac’s refusal to take anything seriously at all, that Gordon was at least half convinced that their entire life as roommates together was being a broadcast as some kind of Odd Couple reality show for the easily amused.

“You ready, man?” Isaac asked from his place at the door into their room. “The others are already waiting for us, but if you need a minute to make yourself pretty…” he trailed off, grinning widely.

Yeah, Gordon thought, and just how fast would you try to kill me the second you found out what my father is, Mr. Comedian? Out loud, he simply announced, “Ready,” while heading for the door.

The rest of the team was waiting for them on the roof of the boy’s dorm when they climbed the ladder to get up there. Douglas, Jasmine, Paul, and Rudolph all looked up as the two boys came over the edge of the roof to join them.

“It’s about time you guys made it,” Jasmine announced. “You know we couldn’t wait much longer. Doug’s power was pretty damn specific.”

Douglas had used his power to get an answer or at least directions toward an answer once per day in order to find the right time for them to do this.

Isaac was bobbing his head. “Sure man, but you know how Professor Kuhn over here it is. We had to get every last bit of that project for Nimbles done before he’d even consider coming out.”

“We’re still five minutes early,” Gordon pointed out flatly. “There was no sense in abandoning our work to come up here before it was time. Now the project’s done, and we don’t have to worry about it later.”

Plus, it had given him a little more time to think about what he was going to do if their theory about Felicity Chambers paid off today. And more specifically, how he was going to get her away from the rest of his team in order to ask her the things that he really needed to ask her.

Paul, ever the peacemaker, raised a hand. “All right, well we’re all here now, so let’s get busy.” He looked toward Rudolph, who stood at the edge of the roof. “You seen where Flick and Avalon went?”

The other boy gestured idly, his voice making it clear that he was trying not to yawn.  He had never been very invested in this, and had made his own doubts clear. Yet he didn’t go against what any of them said, and never refused to help. “They went down to the beach about ten minutes ago. Shiori was with them.”

Jasmine smirked knowingly at that, “Well, at least someone around here is getting some action today.” Seeing the others looking at her, she shrugged.”What? She may or may not be an evil bitch, but you gotta admit, she’s got game.”

“Okay, dude,” Isaac muttered. “Really trying to focus right now, and that’s not helping.”  Visibly shaking it off, he focused on Jasmine. “You first, since it’s safest for you. Make sure it’s clear?”

She nodded, holding both arms out cockily as she stood in front of him. “Well, beam me over, Scotty.”

Obligingly, Isaac reached out to put a hand on her arm, before looking over toward the roof of the girl’s dorm, across the way. A moment later, Jasmine disappeared from where she was standing, and reappeared almost immediately on the other roof.

That was one of the powers that Isaac had inherited during one of their fights over the past few months. At any point, he could transport himself, and/or anyone he was physically touching to any place within his line of sight. Unfortunately, he couldn’t transport through solid objects, even if he could see through them, like glass or bars. Plus, he could only do a maximum of one person other than himself at the same time. Which meant they had to do this slowly.

After taking a moment to look around and make sure the roof of the dorm was clear, Jasmine raised a hand to wave over at the rest of them.

“Right then,” Paul announced while looking to Douglas. “You’re next. Remember, keep your head down. We don’t need this to go to shit this early.”

Clearly unable to help himself, or unwilling to try, Isaac blurted, “So it’s okay if it goes to shit later?”

To his credit, while Gordon would have given the boy an annoyed look, Paul didn’t miss a beat. “Sure, as long as you’re the only one who gets screwed by it.”

Douglas took his place and was transported over to the roof with Jasmine. He was followed by Rudolph, then Gordon took his turn, with Isaac transporting himself and Paul over last.

Finally, they were all on the roof of the girls dorm, with the boys crouched down to avoid being seen as much as possible. Jasmine was keeping an eye out over the edge of the roof to make sure they weren’t interrupted by anyone climbing up.

“Okay then,” Paul whispered. “We’re kind of exposed here, so do your thing, Gordon.”

Without a word, Gordon stepped over and took a knee around the middle of the roof. Holding his hand out with his index finger and thumb apart in the shape of an almost-closed circle, he peered down through the space between the fingers at the roof. After a moment of focus, the image of the roof itself, as seen between his thumb and index finger, changed to show the inside of the room directly below. It was the kitchenette of an apartment for one of the older students.

It was a power that he had gained from the same creature that Isaac had taken his teleportation from. In the Stranger itself, both powers worked together, allowing it to see through solid objects and then teleport itself beyond. But in Gordon’s case, the x-ray vision only worked between his fingers like that (making it obvious when he was using it), and only within a short distance.

Moving his hand around to scan the entire apartment below, Gordon finally nodded. “It’s clear.”

“Great,” Paul announced before looking to Jasmine. “Guess that means you’re up, Jazz.”

The girl took her place next to Gordon then. Kneeling down, she touched her hand against the roof and slowly ran it along the surface. Everywhere her hand touched, the roof turned squiggly and almost see-through, like a very thick liquid. The room below was almost visible.

Jasmine had inherited the third and final portion of the power of the Stranger that Gordon and Isaac had also gotten part of. In her case, she could turn things intangible with a touch. The full power of the Strangers that the three of them had killed allowed it to see through solid objects, render those solid objects intangible (at a distance in its case), and then teleport through.

Once she’d altered enough of the roof, Jasmine gestured. “So who’s first, you big burly men?”

As it turned out, Paul was first that time. Stepping to the shimmering, liquid-like portion of roof, their team leader took a breath before dropping in. Through the space between his fingers, Gordon watched as the other boy cautiously looked around before gesturing for them to follow.

“Next,” Gordon passed the message along, watching as Isaac, Douglas, and then Rudolph went through. He went just before Jasmine, the altered roof material feeling a bit like moving through gelatin before he dropped the rest of the way to land on the floor of the apartment’s kitchenette.

Once they’d all made it into the room, Gordon checked the apartment below the one they were in. An instant later, he dropped his hand, head shaking. His voice was flat. “It’s occupied.”

Wincing, Paul looked around for a moment before pointing to the wall connecting the apartment they were in to the one next door. “Okay, try that one. Maybe we’ll get a little more lucky.”

They did. Between Gordon and Jasmine’s powers, they continued on their semi-roundabout path. First they had to go to the apartment next door, then down one, then over three more apartments before finding one below that was unoccupied. After that, the team had to work their way over until they were directly above their actual target: Flick and Avalon’s dorm room.

From there, once they had made sure that the coast was clear (which they spent at least twice as long on as they had for any other room), Gordon and the others eventually dropped down inside the belly of the beast.

“You know,” Douglas whispered once they were all in the room and his gaze had moved over to where Jasmine was. “You could’ve just like, waited outside the room for us to let you in. I mean, you’re allowed inside the girl’s dorm. You didn’t have to go through all that.”

“And let you boys have all the fun?” Jasmine scoffed with a wave of her hand. “Don’t be selfish.”

Isaac opened his mouth to say something, but before he could get anything out, Paul interrupted with a stage-whisper. “Okay, guys, let’s get busy. Doug’s power might’ve said that now is the best time to search this place, but that doesn’t mean we’ve got all day before they come back.” He looked toward Gordon then, gesturing to the door. “Keep a lookout, just in case?”

Gordon nodded once and stepped that way. Setting his fingers up, he put himself in a position where he could see through into the hallway and toward the main entrance. Hopefully, it would give them enough of a warning if Flick and Avalon returned before they were done searching.

He stood there, listening to his teammates carefully and thoroughly search the entire room behind him while he kept watch. Before they got too involved, however, Gordon spoke up. “Remember to put everything back exactly the way it was,” he pointed out. “You never know what they might notice being out of place. And don’t touch that box.” Without looking, he pointed toward the object in question in the corner of the room. “That’s where Flick keeps the mice.” He knew that much from his thorough examination of the room before they’d dropped inside.

“Dude.” Isaac’s hand was on his arm. “Seriously, don’t be such a worrywart, Gordo. We’ve got this. We’ll find proof that Avalon and Flick are some kind of Eden’s Garden spies, take it to the Headmistress, and she’ll make them tell us what really happened to Roxa. Easy peasy.”

Closing his eyes, Gordon took a deep breath before grunting through gritted teeth. “Stop cursing everything, stop distracting me, stop calling me Gordo, stop touching me, and keep looking.”

He’d made his aversion to being touched quite clear from the beginning. It was already hard enough to make sure he didn’t lose control and accidentally use the power that he’d inherited from his father without being able to explain where it came from. Part of Gordon felt like he should make an excuse about having killed something while he was on a family trip to explain it away. But he was afraid that would just lead to having to answer more than he wanted to. Better to keep his hybrid abilities secret, for now.

Still, it meant that every time one of his teammates touched him unexpectedly, it just reminded Gordon again that as much as he might (usually) like them (well enough), he couldn’t actually trust any of them. Not if they ever found out what he was. If they ever touched him while he wasn’t paying attention and keeping his skin the right temperature, their fingers would instantly freeze, likely to the point of shattering. And that… well, that would probably raise a few questions that he couldn’t answer very easily.

Fifteen minutes later, Isaac cursed while turning in a circle in the middle of the room. “Okay, there’s nothing here. No letters from her handlers back at Eden’s Garden, no vials of poison, no extra cell phones, no maps of secret entrances, nothing.”

“First of all, she does have more than one cell phone,” Jasmine informed him. “Believe me, I’ve seen her using two different ones. And we did find something. These.” Extending her hand, she showed a cloth bag that was meant to hold marbles. This one was full of quarters.  

Douglas raised an eyebrow at that from where he was sitting at Flick’s desk, in front of her computer. “Money for the laundromat?” he guessed with a shrug.

“Money for the–” Jasmine echoed incredulously before shaking her head. “Boys. I’m surrounded by boys.” Gordon had a feeling that she was substituting ‘morons’ in her head. “They’re enchanted coins. I’ve seen them use this stuff before, right before they have a completely boring and inconsequential conversation. Which means…” she trailed off, looking around hopefully.

“The coins must be hiding what they’re really saying,” Gordon calmly finished for her.

“Put ‘em back where they were,” Paul instructed. “If they’re that important, she’ll notice if they’re out of place. Wait, take one of them. It’s a bagful, she probably won’t notice one missing. We’ll see if we can find a way to counter the spell on it so we can hear what they’re really talking about.” To Douglas, he added, “You find a way into that thing yet?”

The other boy nodded then, fingers moving on the keyboard. “Got it. I’ve been looking at her e-mail. Nothing too exciting. Normal, boring messages. It’s so boring and ordinary, in fact, that there’s gotta be code here. No one really talks about stuff this boring over e-mail.”

A figure entered Gordon’s vision through his x-ray power then, just coming through the main door. He turned, interrupting in a flat, calm voice. “Chambers is coming.”

“Crap,” Paul announced succinctly before gesturing. “Come on, come on, contingency plan. That side, go, go go. Put the computer back the way it was. Move, move.” His stage whisper was almost frantic as he waved his hands, ushering everyone into one of the room’s corners.

Once they were there, Jasmine whispered, “Being the only girl on the team, I hate to give you boys this kind of ammunition, but… everyone touch me.”

They did, the whole team crowding in to put their hands on the dark-skinned girl’s offered arms and shoulders. As they did so, the doorknob on the other side of the room started to turn. Jasmine quickly knit her brow in concentration, before she and the rest of the team instantly faded from sight.

That was the other major power that Jasmine had gained. As long as she was either standing still or moving incredibly slowly, she could make herself and anyone (or anything) directly touching her completely invisible. If they stayed very still and didn’t make any noise, Flick wouldn’t know they were there.

When Flick came through the open door, she was on the phone, already speaking. “Yeah, one second.” She crossed over to her desk, reaching under it to flip on the privacy screen. The black shield that popped up around the girl’s side of the room should have left her with complete secrecy. Except for the fact that Gordon, Jasmine, and the rest of the team were inside the effect of the screen. So they could still hear Flick just fine as the girl flopped onto her bed while talking.

“We just have to get that choker on Roxa. If we do that, she can come back here and no one’ll know anything’s different. … Yeah, we can figure out the rest later, after we deal with the Roxa problem.  … I dunno, do werewolves and vampires really have that whole rivalry thing? … Oh gee, Miss Asenath, you tell me. Why would I think you know anything about that? … Right, I’ll alert the media.”

There was a little more conversation after that, enough to let them know that this ‘Asenath’ was staying with Flick’s father. It sounded like some kind of bodyguard position. Eventually, however, Flick checked the time and informed the person on the phone that she had to go.

Gordon didn’t know about anyone else, but he barely breathed until several moments after the blonde girl had left the room and it was clear that she wasn’t coming right back.

Finally, however, he exhaled and stepped away from the others as Jasmine released her invisibility. They came back into view, everyone looking at each other.

“Choker?” Douglas demanded. “They have to get a choker onto Roxa before they can bring her back here? What, for some kind of mind control shit?”

“Obviously,” Jasmine confirmed, folding her arms “What else could it be? You–”

“She said Asenath.” That was Isaac, who uncharacteristically looked incredibly serious, even dour as he repeated himself. “She said Asenath.”

Blinking, Paul nodded slowly, looking at Gordon and then back to Isaac. “Uh, yeah. Why, you know the name?”

“My Edge vision,” Isaac replied. “Back when we went through the lighthouse, it was… it was the first real thing I saw with all this Heretic stuff. The first real fight, I mean. One of my ancestors, I think he was my great, great granduncle or something, he was on this hunt, and they were ambushed by a vampire that killed him and his entire group. Her name was Asenath.”

The rest of the team looked at each other. Paul shook his head. “Asenath’s a pretty rare name. I mean, it’s not proof or anything, but…” he trailed off, frowning. “Close enough. Wait–wait, that’s it.”

“What?” Jasmine prompted. “What’s it?”

Holding up his hand to forestall more questions for a moment, Paul was silent while obviously thinking. Then he straightened. “Do we have an address in here somewhere?”

“Sure.” Isaac held up a box. “From her dad, supposedly. I think it was more clothes or something. Anyway, there’s a return address.”

“But it’s gotta be fake, right?” Douglas put in. “I mean, if she’s really from Eden’s Garden, why would she have a house somewhere in–what was it?”

“Wyoming,” Isaac supplied. “Laramie Falls, Wyoming.”

“Wyoming,” Douglas finished. “Right, why would she have a house somewhere in Wyoming?”

It was Gordon’s turn to speak up. “As a cover. If they check her backstory, she needs a house and at least one parent. Too suspicious otherwise.”

Paul was nodding. “Yeah. But this is our chance. It sounds like this Asenath is living there, probably some kind of servant bodyguard for the guy posing as her dad. Or maybe he is her dad. I dunno. The point is, all we have to do is get there and get a look at this Asenath. If she’s a vampire, we’ll know. And if Flick has a vampire living in her house, that’s proof that she’s actually working with Eden’s Garden, right? We prove there’s a vampire living there.”

“Before they use that choker to brainwash Roxa, or whatever they’re doing?” Douglas demanded.

Nodding firmly, Paul replied, “Yeah, before they go that far. We have to prove she’s a threat first. Otherwise… they won’t believe us. We get the proof that she’s got a vampire living in her house and we take that to Headmistress Sinclaire.”

“If we can trust her,” Jasmine muttered disbelievingly before adding, “And how do we get to Wyoming?”

Paul smiled slightly. “You leave that part to me. I’ve got an idea. But uh, that’s gonna take a couple days. So first, let’s get out of here.” He looked to Douglas. “You got that part?”

The boy nodded, tugging his pen out. A moment later, he’d used it to summon a simple ladder, leading back up to the room they had come down from.

After Gordon took a moment to check that the space above them was still clear, the others set about leaving the room. They’d retrace their steps, back to the roof and then to the other dorm.

From there, they’d continue finding a way to prove their theory about Flick and Eden’s Garden. And meanwhile, Gordon would continue to try to think of a way to get Flick alone, away from anyone else. Because if she was from Eden’s Garden, there was a very important question he had to ask her.

Where does Eden’s Garden keep their enslaved Hrimthurs? Because one of them is my father, and I will burn both of these goddamn schools to the ground if that’s what it takes to free him.

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  1. And there we go, the start of this whole Interlude Arc! Hope you guys enjoyed that, and hey, you got one of the major twists about Gordon at the start of the chapter instead of the end. So there’s that. 😉

    We’ll see how the rest goes. For now, however, we have some important business to get to. Namely: the winners of the mini-interlude drawing! As I mentioned before, we had over 800 dollars in donations last month, which means we have EIGHT drawings this month. Every winner receives one 1000 word mini-interlude that they can use to commission just like any other mini-interlude. They may use it immediately to have their request added to the queue, they may add money in order to make it longer, or they may wait and save it for later. It is totally up to them.

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    Tags for this chapter are: Douglas Frey, Felicity Chambers, Flick, Flick – I’m Pretty Sure You couldn’t Have Had A More Incriminating-Sounding Conversation If You TRIED., Gordon Kuhn, I Am Vaguely Curious About How Many Readers Knew What A Hrimthur was Without Googling It., Isaac Acosta, Jazz Rhodes, Paul Calburn, Rudolph Parsons

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  2. ““The coins must be hiding what they’re really saying,” Gordon calmly finished for her.

    “Put ‘em back where they were,” Paul instructed. “If they’re that important, she’ll notice if they’re out of place. Wait, take one of them. It’s a bagful, she probably won’t notice one missing. We’ll see if we can find a way to counter the spell on it so we can hear what they’re really talking about.” ”
    Me: Paul might be surprised on that assumption of his. And finding out what they are really talking about, and who they are talking to, will be quite the shock to Roxa’s team. Frankly, they have no real idea what they butting their noses into.

    ““Before they use that choker to brainwash Roxa, or whatever they’re doing?” Douglas demanded.

    Nodding firmly, Paul replied, “Yeah, before they go that far. We have to prove she’s a threat first. Otherwise… they won’t believe us. We get the proof that she’s got a vampire living in her house and we take that to Headmistress Sinclaire.” ”
    Me: *facepalms* What is this, ‘Jump to stupid conclusions day’ or something? This does complicate things greatly though. Since they’re under the delusion that Flick is brainwashing Roxa, they’re not going to believe/trust anything she will say.

    A missing tag here is “Good Intentions gone horribly wrong” As for Gordon’s dad, I did have to look up the name. Very interesting…

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    1. Me: Paul might be surprised on that assumption of his. And finding out what they are really talking about, and who they are talking to, will be quite the shock to Roxa’s team. Frankly, they have no real idea what they butting their noses into.

      They really don’t, no.

      Me: *facepalms* What is this, ‘Jump to stupid conclusions day’ or something? This does complicate things greatly though. Since they’re under the delusion that Flick is brainwashing Roxa, they’re not going to believe/trust anything she will say.

      *snickers* Well, when they start out from the conclusion that Flick is evil, and then make everything they see fit that already-drawn conclusion… yeah.

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  3. I’m surprised that A) Wyatt didn’t show up to stop them, and B) they didn’t find Flick’s secret notebook or the scrapbook Joselyn made. Also that Flick’s item sense didn’t alert her to their presence, but she has to consciously activate that, right? She should to in the habit of doing that.

    So either these guys (and Jazz) are insanely lucky or Wyatt is already on to them.

    I Am Vaguely Curious About How Many Readers Knew What A Hrimthur was Without Googling It.

    I didn’t. Had to look it up. If I’m reading these results right, they’re a type of Jotun/frost giant? That’s cool. Really interested in finding out how his parents ended up having him, or how much contact he had with Heretics before Pericles contacted him. Also where his mom is. I don’t think she’s dead, but she doesn’t get mentioned enough to know.

    At the very least though, this makes at least one member of this team that won’t care if/when he finds out Roxa is a werewolf.

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    1. B) they didn’t find Flick’s secret notebook or the scrapbook Joselyn made.

      She hides those way too well to be found in a quick search by some teenagers. After all, wouldn’t want people like Ruthers’ lackeys to find them. And the notebook she keeps on her.

      Also that Flick’s item sense didn’t alert her to their presence, but she has to consciously activate that, right? She should to in the habit of doing that.

      Between her not activating it and Jazz’s invisibility helping to override the passive effect, yes.

      As for the rest of what you said, well… read on through the arc! Errr, when it’s posted.

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      1. Gaia and Wyatt! Hell, one would expect the entire buildings to be laced up with security spells. Kohaku too! Guess the Alter power they got is pretty good for infiltration if it overrides security magic.

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  4. Sigh at first i didn’t like your idea of this interlude but now i find it really coo since it allow us to see how “normal” heretic students think of relation with stranger

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  5. The team is going to a) find Roxa, b) rescue her from Flick, c) tear the choker off her neck, d) Flick bursts in, e) everyone realizes that they’re still all friends and can live with this, f) Gordon confesses what he really is.

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    1. Well I mean, there is a conspiracy to induct as many hybrid children as possible into the school. I wouldn’t be surprised if literally half of the Bystander-kin were hybrids.

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      1. I thought they could have quickly gone through a hallway or something, then she could have opened the door for them, rather than trying to go through unoccupied rooms.

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  6. I think they’re asking the wrong questions. One day they should ask, “When is the best time to ask Flick about what happened to Roxa?” Then the next day they should ask, “What should we say to Flick to get her to tell us what happened to Roxa?” And so forth. Instead it seems like they sort of beat around the bush with questions like, “When is the best time to break into her room without getting caught?”

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    1. I’ve been saying Doug is asking the wrong questions, but it doesn’t look like he or anyone else on his team is smart enough to realize this.

      Then again we don’t know how his power works exactly. He might ask it something like “Is Flick Chambers brainwashing my teammate Roxa?” and the response he gets back, which was phrased as ‘The best way of finding the answer to the question’ and not ‘The answer to the question’, is “Ask Flick Chambers” and he doesn’t trust Flick enough to do so.

      But they are being really, really dumb about this.

      Also, Crossroads really needs to cut out this anti-Gardens shit. A “friendly rivialy” is fine, but the state of things now is borderline war and that’s not good for humanity.
      Which is probably why outside forces work both sides against each other… .

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  7. Why would Pericles recruit a hybrid student without telling the headmistress or any of the other professors who know about them?

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    1. I’m pretty sure Gaia and company do know about Gordon, the same way they knew about Shiori, Vanessa, and Sean’s uncle. It’s just that Gordon doesn’t know they know. That raises the question about why Pericles didn’t tell him, but that may have something to do with how his mom has been keeping his father secret.

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  8. An interesting start to the Investigations Arc especially with how close to current events this chapter was. I wonder if the next few chapters will end up jumping around in the timeline or if we’re going to keep moving forward from this point. I’m sure it’ll be interesting either way. I had to look up what sort of creature a Hrimthur was. That’s interesting though. I wonder who else knows that he is a hybrid. Still, it looks like that’s at least one person in the group who will be willing the believe that Roxa isn’t evil just because she’s a werewolf.

    Roxa’s old team has some cool powers. I was surprised that they managed to get into Flick’s room so easily though, especially with the other security spells that we’ve seen Wyatt using. Maybe Gaia is playing some sort of long game here? When they started searching the room I thought they were going to end up taking a peek at Flick’s journal. I guess we’re never going to end up seeing whats inside there… 😦

    Their suspicions that Flick and Avalon are Eden’s Garden spies is kind of interesting. I had sort of assumed at this point that the fact that Avalon is Gaia’s daughter and that Flick is getting lessons from Gaia is more widespread knowledge then it appears to be. I would have thought that would have sort of put the kibosh on the Eden’s Garden spy theory (especially for people who are actively investigating instead of just listening to the rumour mill). At least their plan is to take the evidence to Gaia instead of someone else.

    The fact that Asenath ended up killing Isaac’s ancestor’s group is interesting. I wonder if we’ll end up finding out more about what was going on with that at some point. I mean indiscriminate murder isn’t Asenath’s modus operandi after all.

    Either way I’m really excited for the rest of this arc. Especially with the knowledge that the two teams are scheduled for a nice relaxing New York vacation where absolutely nothing will go wrong 😉

    A minor typo that I spotted here, very should be every.

    Still, it meant that very time one of his teammates touched him unexpectedly, it just reminded Gordon again that as much as he might (usually) like them (well enough), he couldn’t actually trust any of them.

    Another minor typo that I spotted, figured should be figure.

    A figured entered Gordon’s vision through his x-ray power then, just coming through the main door.

    As one final note, you might want to think about adding the name of the character that the interlude is focusing on to the chapter title. In other words have something like Investigations 25-01 – Gordon Kuhn – (Interlude Arc).

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    1. Indiscriminate murder isn’t Asenath’s MO, but it is the MO of a lot of heretics, and a lot of Heretics do make a habit of doing things that make killing them not murder. Like, say, killing children for being the wrong species as a matter of policy.

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      1. Sorry, I guess I might not have been clear there. I completely agree, I’m assuming there is a lot more to the story then was shown in Isaac’s edge vision as to why Asenath killed his ancestor and his team.

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    2. Roxa’s old team has some cool powers. I was surprised that they managed to get into Flick’s room so easily though, especially with the other security spells that we’ve seen Wyatt using. Maybe Gaia is playing some sort of long game here? When they started searching the room I thought they were going to end up taking a peek at Flick’s journal. I guess we’re never going to end up seeing whats inside there…

      *innocent whistling*

      A minor typo that I spotted here, very should be every.

      Thanks!

      Another minor typo that I spotted, figured should be figure.

      And thanks again!

      As one final note, you might want to think about adding the name of the character that the interlude is focusing on to the chapter title. In other words have something like Investigations 25-01 – Gordon Kuhn – (Interlude Arc).

      And done!

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  9. Quick question. Is the timing power a reference to Alicorn’s story Luminosity, or it just a coincidence?

    So *this* is what it looks like when inquisitive students don’t go to the trustworthy adults they know with suspicious information. A whole lot of flailing around in the dark.

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    1. Nope, sorry, I haven’t read it. The power he has is basically the ability to ask one question a day and either get an answer or directions toward an answer. Every time he asks what happened to Roxa or how to find out what happened to Roxa/etc, he keeps being pointed toward Flick. And in this case, he asked when the best time to search Flick’s room was.

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      1. Ah. Well there’s a character in Luminosity whose power is almost exactly this, except without the usage limit and without a time limit. (Who, now that I think about it, might show up in the sequel rather than the first book.

        Also I’m not sure if you’d like Luminosity but I think if you did you’d like it a lot, so I’ll recommend it. You can find it for free online by googling Luminosity + Alicorn.

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  10. …if it turns out that they’re all hybrids or otherwise on Flick’s side I am going to laugh *so hard*

    And then on going to find a way to slap them all for being nitwits

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  11. ooookay… so, that add more suspects to be the Fossor undead spy, since they spied once on Flick, no reason they or at least one of them, conveniently the spy, didn’t witness some sort of debriefing about the sharkbot operation…

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    1. and it just clicked in my head: it’s really befitting of an undead spy to be called a mole… what, with the undead clawing it’s way through the soil to get out…

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  12. Not bad, but… Gordon’s stoic exterior means a lot more needs to be explained by telling his thoughts. It’s a less satisfying means of exposition.

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  13. So, uh… does Flick’s skeleblineist power where she senses all of the objects in a certain distance not work on invisible things? Or was she just ignoring the half dozen invisible spies to talk about incriminating secrets? Or is the room/privacy screen much larger than I think it is.

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    1. I asked about that up above:
      Me:

      Also that Flick’s item sense didn’t alert her to their presence, but she has to consciously activate that, right? She should get in the habit of doing that.

      Cerulean:

      Between her not activating it and Jazz’s invisibility helping to override the passive effect, yes.

      I’m really glad I’m not the only one who picked up on that detail.

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  14. That, and he also didn’t particularly relish the idea of spending a bunch of time laughing alongside the very same people who would cheerfully murder him if they knew what he really was. [ … ]

    Most of the people at Cossroads, if they knew what Gordon really was, what his father was, would want him dead. There were only a couple of people that he could trust with his secret.

    Well, I’ll just say that there’s some real irony in that the people that Gordon & his teammates are suspicious of, namely Flick & her circle, would be those most accepting of him being a half-Alter hybrid and very unlikely to harm him just because of his ancestry.

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  15. So, I just reread this looking into Gordon for his role in the most recent arc, and I noticed that there’s an immense amount of missing information here.

    In all the other interlude arc chapters we get a decent synopsis of the background of the character.

    Here? We learn that Gordon is a hybrid, that his father is a Hrimthur, and that his mother was a heretic. That’s it. No names. Nothing about which faction his mother is with, nothing about why he’s at Crossroads, not EG, nothing about the relationship of his parents. No mention of anything from his childhoon. Only Pericles is mentioned as trusted. That’s a whole lot of missing information.

    And this is Heretical Edge, where a total absence of information when said information is expected points to memory magic, mindwhammies, or conspiracies. Or several of those things.

    Add in that Gordon is phased by precisely nothing and is willing to burn everything for a goal, and I think he’s pulling a Deveron, or something like it.

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