Mini-Interlude 22 – Croc

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“Uh, here’s your order, sir. Will there be anything else?” The scraggly-haired teenager who held the tray full of three cheeseburgers, two orders of fries, two large drinks, and an order of chicken nuggets stared at his customer with wide eyes. He had to tilt his head back to look the man in the eyes.

“No thanks,” the man named Croc replied easily while taking the tray. “This’ll be just fine.” He gave the boy a nod before turning to walk across the mall food court. The boy’s stare was obvious, as were those of several of the people he passed.

It was nothing new. Born a member of the now-extinct Calusa Native American tribe that lived around what was now Florida, Croc had always stood out. He was an enormous man to begin with, which would have drawn people’s attention anyway. But adding in his Native ancestry drew their eyes even more. And of course, he had more than one reason for standing out from his peers.

He’d come to expect the stares, towering over everyone as he did. Such things had long since stopped bothering him, and he’d learned to differentiate the dangerous ones from those who were just curious. After all, correctly identifying danger was a fairly important skill for someone in his line of work.

Walking to a table on the far end of the food court, one that overlooked the ice skating rink below, he set the tray down and took a seat. Taking a handful of fries, he tossed them in his mouth while giving a slow, casual glance around (people tended to stop staring when he looked at them).

Ugh. The fries were cold. Frowning slightly, he gave a long look toward the counter where he’d bought his food. He could go back, but… Shrugging, the big man simply poured the fries out onto the tray and laid his hand over them. A moment of thought made his palm heat up. After that, it only took a few seconds before he took his hand away and tried another fry. There, warm again. That was better.

He’d worked his way through half the fries and one of his burgers by the time he sensed the approach of the man that he’d been waiting for. Which probably meant that the guy had been watching him the entire time and only just then chose to make his presence known.

“They’re watching you,” Wyatt Rendell announced while pulling the opposite chair out so that he could sit down.

“Chicken nuggets,” Croc replied, “As requested.” He slid the box over to the other man along with the second drink. “And an iced tea. Who’s watching? I suppose you already made sure it’s safe to talk.”

“Of course I did.” Wyatt pointed to the railing that the table was near. About six feet away, Croc could see a rune scribbled on it. Turning the other way, he saw a second rune about six feet in the other direction.

“There are six privacy spells protecting us right now,” Wyatt explained. “Those are two that I’m willing to show you. The others are mine.”

“That’s why you were so specific about where to sit.” Smiling faintly, Croc nodded. “How long did you spend setting this spot up before you felt safe enough to meet here?”

Wyatt’s head shook. “Not long. Three hours. I was in a hurry.”

While Croc shook his head in wonder at that, the smaller man opened the box of nuggets. Instead of eating any of them immediately, however, he set a smaller box of toothpicks next to them. One by one, he pushed a toothpick into each of the nuggets and left it there. Gradually, each tiny sliver of wood turned a light blue color. Wyatt watched until each of them changed, then collected the picks before putting one of the nuggets into his mouth.

Poison, Croc realized with amazement. The man was testing to make sure the nuggets hadn’t been poisoned. He did the same with the drink before taking a sip.

“Eleven people watched you walk from the counter to this seat,” Wyatt finally answered after eating another nugget. “Starting from the nearest,” he added while reaching into his pocket to take out a driver’s license. “Jessica Wallace, age twenty-four. Local. Organ donor. The one that–”

Croc coughed. “Wyatt, did you steal that woman’s ID just to check up on her because she was looking at me?”

Scoffing, Wyatt shook his head. “Of course not. These,” he produced a pack of blank driver’s license cards, “are enchanted. All I have to do is get close enough to touch someone, and any license they have will copy itself onto one of these. I copied one from everyone who was watching you and ran them through my usual search protocols. They haven’t tripped anything yet, but you never know.”

Unable to help himself, Croc whistled low. “That’s pretty impressive. But trust me, I’m used to people staring. Kinda hard to blend in when you look like I do. You, on the other hand, no one sees you as a threat. They dismiss you. But they really shouldn’t. Because you… like I said, you’re pretty damn impressive. Which, I suppose, is why I wanted to talk to you again.”

“You’re still trying to convince me to betray my people,” Wyatt retorted, his tone affronted. “I told you when we were at Eden’s Garden, I will not betra–”

Wincing, Croc shook his head. It was true that he’d made the pitch to the other man more than once while he’d been at the Garden. And in the intervening time, he’d only become more impressed from the details he’d been able to pick out about the scrawny, unimpressive-seeming security guard. If Crossroads didn’t understand what they had with this guy, he was damned sure going to pick up their slack. Especially since he—well, Wyatt’s skill with security spells wasn’t the only thing that Croc was interested in.

“No, man, not betray. It’s just… you’d be good with the Unset. We treat our people right, and… and you’re the best security enchanter I’ve ever seen. I don’t want you to betray anyone, Wyatt. I’m not asking you to hurt anyone you work with. I just think you’d fit really well with us. You’re brilliant at this stuff, man. Absolutely brilliant. I’ve been around for a long time, and I’ve never seen anyone that can do the stuff you do, as easily as you do it.

“And, you know… it’d let you be near your sister.”

Wyatt paused at that. His mouth opened and shut before he shook his head. “But I’d have to leave my other sister and my niece. They need me. I can’t just abandon them. And I won’t abandon Gaia. She stood up for me. She got me this job, I… I owe her.”

Smiling faintly, Croc nodded. “Yeah, from what I hear, Gaia Sinclaire’s pretty good. But what about that Committee? What about Ruthers and his group?”

Meeting his gaze Wyatt announced flatly, “Gabriel Ruthers will pay for his crimes. But I won’t abandon my family to do it.”

“That’s fair.” Croc wanted to push harder. He really thought that Wyatt would be good with the Unset. But the man was right, he had two younger family members at that school. And from what he’d heard, at least one of those family members was really good at finding herself in trouble.

“That’s fair?” Wyatt echoed, frowning with suspicion. “But?”

Croc’s head shook. “But nothing, man. You’re right, the kids need you. The whole reason I want you to join us is because you’re so good at protecting people. If you abandon your niece and sister just like that, what’s the point?” He paused then before adding, “But let me make you this offer.”

“I knew it,” Wyatt retorted, stiffening in his seat. “An offer I can’t refuse, you–”

“Easy,” Croc quietly reassured the man. “I know. I know how easy it is to ruin your trust. I get it. But, that’s not what this is. It’s not a threat. Like I said, an offer.” He pushed on before Wyatt could respond. “If the time comes that you can’t stay there anymore, for whatever reason, you have a place to come. Okay? That’s it. It’s an open offer. We could really use you. Whether it’s after your family graduates and moves on or… anything else. If you can leave or you just… have to. You come to Eden’s Garden and the Unset will take care of you. ”

“An open offer…” Wyatt was clearly chewing that over, searching for the problem with it before he squinted. “I’m not making a promise. I’m not signing anything. I’m not–”

“You don’t have to,” Croc assured him, finishing his last burger. “No promises, no contracts. Just this.” From his pocket, he produced a simple, almost blank card with nothing on it other than the barely visible indent of a robin in flight against a circle with a rose at the bottom.

Taking the card, Wyatt frowned. “What is it? What does it mean? Where is it from? What does it–”

Smiling, Croc shook his head. “It doesn’t mean anything. Nothing. The symbol is completely meaningless. The bird, the circle, the rose, they don’t lead anywhere. But anyone who saw that card would think it did, and they’d waste time trying to work it out. The design is nothing. But if you ever want to reconsider, or you need the Unset, or… anything. You write on that card and I’ll get what you write. And if it’s an emergency, you rip it in half. I’ll come right in.”

“Why?” Wyatt squinted at him, still suspicious. “Why would you give me something like this after I told you I wouldn’t join your side?”

“We’re on the same side,” Croc pointed out lightly. “Protecting people. And—well… Like I said, you’re one of the best security people I’ve ever seen. You’re worth the wait, man. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise.”

It took the man a moment to move again. He was just squinting off into the distance as though trying to work out how to respond to that. In the end, he shoved the card in a pocket and stood up. “I might throw it away.”

Croc nodded then. “That’s your right. You can throw it away, burn it, do whatever you want. Actually, don’t burn it. That’ll probably set off the emergency alert and I’ll come find you. Point is, do whatever you want with it. I’d like you to keep it, just in case. But that’s just me.”

Pausing then, he cleared his throat before nodding to the seat that the man had just stood up from. “You don’t have to leave so fast.”

Wyatt just blinked at him blankly. “Why would I stay any longer? I told you no, you gave me a way to change my mind, and I already ate the nuggets.”

Because I kind of like your company, and I’m still trying to figure out if there’s any chance of you reciprocating that. The thought flashed through the big man’s mind, but he stopped himself from saying it. Skittish as Wyatt was about a simple job offer, expressing any kind of interest in that way would obviously push him too far. “I just thought you might want to sit down for awhile.”

“No.” The other man shook his head, still looking suspicious. “I don’t wait around for them to find me.”

“Them?” Croc echoed, wishing he knew more about this man, and what had happened to make him so suspicious of everyone.

“Anyone who’s looking,” Wyatt explained flatly, his gaze already dubiously studying the people around them. “There’s always someone. I don’t give them that kind of advantage.”

“Fair enough, man.” Croc couldn’t argue with that, as much as he wanted to. He really did enjoy Wyatt’s company, as odd as the man was. And as they’d told the Chambers girl, the Unset weren’t eunuchs. Though in his case, considering the amount of anything even approaching a date he’d been on in the past decade or so meant anything, they might as well be.

“Like I said, you change your mind, you let me know.” He offered his hand for Wyatt to shake. After a brief (for him) pause to skeptically examine the hand, the other man did so. They shook, and the scrawny little Crossroads security guard slipped away.

As Croc watched, the man walked through the crowded food court and moved to the restroom. Rather than going into either of them, however, he stepped into the janitor’s supply closet. The door closed after him. Less than ten seconds later, one of the janitors went to the same door, tugging it open to reveal nothing but mops and cleaning chemicals. Wyatt was gone.

Croc sighed a little, but he hadn’t really expected anything better than that. Hoped, maybe. But honestly, he really would have been incredibly surprised (and probably disappointed) if Wyatt had so easily abandoned his niece and sister. This was just… nice. And the closest thing to a date that he’d had for longer than he cared to admit.

Maybe he’d wait awhile and then see if the other man wanted to get together again. It’d take some doing to make him understand that he didn’t want anything in return, and that it wasn’t a trick or a trap. But… well, if letting Wyatt pick the spot and prepare it for several hours ahead of time just for a fifteen minute meeting was what it took to spend time with the man, then… well, he’d do that.

For a guy like Wyatt Rendell, it was worth the extra effort.

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  1. There we go, hope you guys enjoyed that brief little look at Croc and his continued efforts to woo (in more than one way, apparently) Wyatt. We’ll see a bit more of that later on.

    We’ve also had another commissioned mini-interlude added onto the list to come up soon. This one will be 1500 words focusing on Shiori and Avalon’s conversation after Avalon and Flick kissed for the first time.

    Anyway, tags for this chapter are: Between Croc And Hisao We Need To Meet Some Of The Eden’s Garden Hardliners Who DON’T Get Along With Crossroads., Croc, Dude Wyatt Let You Buy His Food. Even If He Did Test It For Poison That’s Still Practically First Base For Him., Wyatt Rendell

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  2. On a napkin, Croc’s plan for luring Wyatt over to Eden’s Garden:

    -Tell him he’s awesome
    -Be, like, really hot
    -Chicken nuggets
    -Give him your number
    -Tell him he’s awesome again
    -Something about his sister? Unlikely to work, do not talk about family on first date
    -Pay for the meal
    -Maybe flex a bit?

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  3. I knew Croc was interesred in Wyatt, but I didn’t think he’d be interested in him too. I wonder what Wyatt will say when he finds out… probably a more intense version of Flick’s “why wouod you be interested in me?” Moment last chapter.

    Anyway, I’m wondering how exactly Croc knows that Wyatt’s related to Abigail, Koren, and Flick. Not too hard, because it shouldn’t be that hard to figure out from the Garden perspective (the whole situation surrounding Abigail’s hosptialization must have been a clear indicator), but I’m wondering how many other people have figured it out.

    Between Croc And Hisao We Need To Meet Some Of The Eden’s Garden Hardliners Who DON’T Get Along With Crossroads.

    If I had money I might impulse-commission a mini-lude of Abigail meeting and verbally eviscerating one such Hardliner.

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    1. Anyway, I’m wondering how exactly Croc knows that Wyatt’s related to Abigail, Koren, and Flick. Not too hard, because it shouldn’t be that hard to figure out from the Garden perspective (the whole situation surrounding Abigail’s hosptialization must have been a clear indicator), but I’m wondering how many other people have figured it out.

      Because that’s just how good Croc is. Don’t worry, it’s not like… common knowledge or anything.

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  4. This was not quite the interlude I wanted, but it was the interlude I needed.

    The clear solution here is the bring Flick and Koren over to the Garden as well, but then you’d have to bring all of Flicks little group as well and to do that they’d have to clear Valley’s name over there. But they’d hunting down the people hunting her anyways so t’s not like it’s not an item on their list.
    Then again Wyatt is good enough at evading people he and Croc could set up a secrect relationship like Hisao and Dare have without much trouble. that is if Wyatt could ever open up to someone for that sort of relationship. It’ll be a bit of work on Croc’s part but the man has time and his plan is good; give Wyatt space and slowly get though to him.

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  5. “Eleven people watched your walk from the counter to this seat,” Wyatt finally answered

    Should that “your” be “you”?

    Like I said, your one of the best security people I’ve ever seen.

    That “your” should be “you’re”.

    Aww, this is a cute chapter. Croc seems like a nice dude.

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    1. Should that “your” be “you”?

      Either is correct, I think, depending on whether ‘walk’ is read as a verb or a noun. As written, it’s a noun, but you’re right in that it also works in context the other way.

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    2. Should that “your” be “you”?

      As Maurice said, it technically could be either way. But you’re right, it’s better the other way, so fixed. 🙂

      That “your” should be “you’re”.



  6. I am just about catatonic with the amount of adorable this chapter is. I didn’t know I needed this ship but now I don’t know what I’d do without it.

    Like, just … I find size differences and staid/energetic pairings really cute in relationships, so the thought of this massive, laid-back dude quietly crushing on scrawny, fidgety Wyatt is just too much cute to me, it’s practically disabling. I’ve never been so glad that you tag chapters by character now, because I need to go back through all your chapters with Croc in them and reread them and aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

    And now I’m imagining Wyatt curling up in Croc’s big arms and actually feeling safe for once because he’s being held by the man he loves (who also happens to be a professional security expert) and oh dear this ship is rapidly approaching my top 5 ship list within ten minutes of it even making it onto my list of ships.

    I’m done for. Leave me behind. I’m going down with this ship.

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    1. lol, glad you enjoyed it. I like to add in representation for people whenever I can, and since I did mention that Wyatt was gay (or at least had interest in men) a long time ago, I figured it was time to show someone else actually being interested in him.

      Because Wyatt is awesome.

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  7. So…I’ve been meaning to say for a while now that you’re having some inconsistency with your explanation for how magic works. Early on, you drove the point home how magic doesn’t last–any spell or enchantment has to be continually renewed. Case in point, the wards surrounding Crossroads have to be renewed every day.

    But we see many examples that contradict this. Heretic weapons, for example, never have to be renewed. The containers for said weapons never have to be renewed. The card that Croc gave Wyatt apparently never has to be renewed, because he’s giving it to him to use whenever (including years from now), and Wyatt sure as hell isn’t going to renew it (or can’t).

    If there’s some kind of difference between spells and enchantments, then why isn’t Crossroads’s security done through enchantments? If you can enchant a spell into an object, why isn’t that the standard practice for anything that doesn’t have to be done on the spot? If you can enchant a privacy spell into a coin permanently, why don’t Heretics carry objects enchanted with any number of useful spells everywhere they go? Why don’t Heretics wear armor that’s permanently enchanted with stuff like that Kevlar spell?


    1. First Steps 2-04:

      I raised my hand, and when he looked to me, I asked, “But what about magic things that do seem to last forever. Like umm…” Shifting, I pulled the holster for my staff off my belt and held it up, tugging the stick in and out a couple times. “I’m pretty sure no one’s sneaking up to refresh this every time I pull it out. Or the shield over the school.”

      “A very good question, Miss Chambers,” Carfried nodded easily. “Indeed, in the case of your weapon sheath, and others that I’m sure many of you have, those what we call ‘passive effects.’ An object may be enchanted, by someone of sufficient skill, with a passive effect such as the extra-dimensional storage space that will be permanent. Doing so requires vast amounts of experience and skill. And you cannot make an active effect permanent. No fireballs that last forever, I’m afraid. Again, there are inherited Stranger traits that may mimic what you think of as magic, but true Heretical Magic is based only on Enchantment, and that requires time and energy to create. And as for the shield over the school, that is refreshed every morning and provided power by every faculty member in order to keep it going for another twenty-four hours.”

      Of course, that explanation is itself contradicted by the fact that Columbus and Avalon were able to make a dimensional storage space for Flick’s sand canister in Second Hunt 16-01. I don’t think they qualify as having “vast amounts of experience and skill,” so the main question still stands. Why don’t the Heretics make Kevlar-spelled shirts, privacy coins, etc. for everyone?


      1. Columbus and Avalon had a little help from Nevada since it was for a grade project. But yes, Columbus is quite good, that was kind of the point of him being able to get it done at all.

        Why don’t the Heretics make Kevlar-spelled shirts, privacy coins, etc. for everyone?

        That’s the entire job that people who specialize in skills from Development track do. For FULL Heretics, not students who are just learning. Full Heretics do have other Heretics who basicall operate as Q for them and provide all kinds of enchanted items to use.

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